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Friday, December 15, 2017

The new member

This week we have been doing Christmas songs and stuff like that and so we write a story about Santa.Here is my story

Ring ring ring ring “if you want them back you have to come get them”said the mysterious person.  

As it was Santa's day off he was sat in his comfortable chair and eating cookies the phone suddenly rang and woke Santa up from his Santa nape and he pick up the phone… “if you want them you have to come get them come to the village and you will come UN armed ok” said the mysterious person as Santa ran he grabbed a candy cane and use it to walk but secretly it is a gun that can trap people .Then suddenly Santa jumped out the window and deployed his invisible parachute.A we while later/2 hour later finally Santa saw this mysterious person and it was his twin brother… “Hey brother since it was your birthday today I just want to say happy birthday”.Here I got you a present. I was the coolest present I could think of a new reindeer.I named him Rudolph”.And can I have a hug thank you.         
                    The END


1 comment:

  1. Hi there Hunter

    My name is Jade F and I will be working with your school cluster in the Summer Learning Journey Programme this summer break.

    I really enjoyed reading your story! I especially liked how Santa had cool gadgets like an invisible parachute, that’s awesome. What gave you the idea behind your story?

    I hope you come in and join the blogging programme this summer. There’s heaps of fun activities to do and many things to blog about, I reckon you’d love it. All you have to do is head onto the activities page and begin the activities. If you would like to have a look at your mates blog posts or other student’s blogs who are in the Summer Learning Journey with you check out the programme’s twitter feed here
    https://sites.google.com/a/manaiakalani.org/connected-learners-share/sljtwitterfeeds

    You can start in any order you’d like with the activities and once you have completed a task, post it onto your blog! The more activities you do, the more points you earn towards winning prizes at the end of programme!

    Use the link below to get started and I hope to see your blog posts this summer!
    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities

    Jade F :)

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