This week we had a choose of doing what we wanted about hokey pokey. I choose a 6 sentence story here it is.
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Thursday, September 6, 2018
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Hi I'm Jacob from South Hornby school. I like you you put a picture as the background but next time you could make the font a different colour. I learnt from this post that you put baking soda to make Hokey Pokey.
ReplyDeleteI like hokey pokey but don't think I could eat 1000 pieces. A different coloured font would be easier to read.
ReplyDeleteyeah a different font would be a bit easier to read but i like how you put that i have you have t eat 1000 pieces of hokey pokey that would be pretty filling.
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