This week we have been writing a story about a photo.we had to describe the photo.
I found challenging that to get really good description words.
Thursday, August 30, 2018
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HI Hunter James from SHS. I really like how you talked about fortnite. I really like fortnite. maybe next time put a picture of tilted towers one of the spots nearly every goes to on the map.
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter, I like that you have used such great descriptive language and a simile in your writing to compare the stone walls to concrete. I saw a castle when I was in Scotland and it looked ancient just like you have described. Next time, I think you need to check your sentences make sense. You can do this by reading your sentences aloud and listening for extra words. Maybe you could have attached a picture to show us what you were writing about. I wonder where the ancient castle was in the photo?
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